Well I think I managed to increase the tension a bit yesterday after all...But now I have a long boring scene ahead of me. Basically I have three main characters, and they all need to get interviewed/interrogated. Everyone's looking for the comatose MC, but MWAHAHAHA they can't find her. Haha. Fun times. And yet I'm still so far away from her waking up...danngggit.
BUT I think I'm going to the villain's POV...cuz I really have no idea who she is. :P Good times. And it might make things a bit more interesting.